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Revision should have been write stuff

This was his frequent con

tempt for readers.

The contempt was

exhibited not in the

content of his

columns, but in

their presentation.

They'd often begin

with huge

50-60-word intro

ductions full of sub

sidiary phrases.

There would follow

similar unwieldy,

meandering para

graphs.

This would require

re-readings by the

determined reader.

It was though

McGuinness had

thrown piles of fae

ces on to the page,

to be cleaned up by

the reader; food for

thought from a

towering intellect.

This was ironic,

given McGuinness's

railing against

teachers' unions,

post-modernists,

declining education

standards and what

he perceived as bul

lshit thinking.

For what most

McGuinness

columns needed

was old-fashioned

revision a term

from the reading,

writing and arith

metic days.

If McGuinness had

bothered to spend

just five minutes

revising, he would

have been perform

ing a service to his

arguments and his

readers.

Instead, he once

bawled a sub editor

out for changing a

few words in an in

tro, and had the

words restored.

A ``thank you''

might have been ap

propriate, because

his columns needed

the benefit of a sub

editor who could

clean up the

language and pres

ent McGuinness's

arguments in better

sequence.

But this was not the

preserve of lesser

intellects, though

the McGuinness in

tellect was used in

support of increas

ingly unsustainable

positions.

There was no better

example than his

opposing Sir Roland

Wilson's stolen gen

erations report.

Even if it were ad

mitted that ``stolen

generations'' is an

emotional, evoca

tive term that

weights the argu

ment, that the re

moval policy was

designed with the

best Christian, pa

ternalistic motives;

that there were in

numerable cases

where removal was

justified; that there

were cases of un

justifiable removals

done with honour

able motives, you

would still be left

with wrenching

cases which led to

cruel suffering.

It would require

metaphorical blind

ness not to concede

that, or adopting a

contrary position

for the sake of being

contrarian.

It was the position

McGuinness adopt

ed, or charitably, he

had just become

blind.

Whatever his pos

ition, there were al

ways compen

sations.

A favourite was his

passing reference to

then Science Minis

ter Barry Jones as

the only joke in the

Federal Parlia

ment.

No evidence was ad

duced in support of

this description.

There didn't need to

be: the Intellect had

spoken.

The tragedy at the

end was that the

intellect was only in

support of the voice.

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