Revision should have been write stuff
This was his frequent con
tempt for readers.
The contempt was
exhibited not in the
content of his
columns, but in
their presentation.
They'd often begin
with huge
50-60-word intro
ductions full of sub
sidiary phrases.
There would follow
similar unwieldy,
meandering para
graphs.
This would require
re-readings by the
determined reader.
It was though
McGuinness had
thrown piles of fae
ces on to the page,
to be cleaned up by
the reader; food for
thought from a
towering intellect.
This was ironic,
given McGuinness's
railing against
teachers' unions,
post-modernists,
declining education
standards and what
he perceived as bul
lshit thinking.
For what most
McGuinness
columns needed
was old-fashioned
revision a term
from the reading,
writing and arith
metic days.
If McGuinness had
bothered to spend
just five minutes
revising, he would
have been perform
ing a service to his
arguments and his
readers.
Instead, he once
bawled a sub editor
out for changing a
few words in an in
tro, and had the
words restored.
A ``thank you''
might have been ap
propriate, because
his columns needed
the benefit of a sub
editor who could
clean up the
language and pres
ent McGuinness's
arguments in better
sequence.
But this was not the
preserve of lesser
intellects, though
the McGuinness in
tellect was used in
support of increas
ingly unsustainable
positions.
There was no better
example than his
opposing Sir Roland
Wilson's stolen gen
erations report.
Even if it were ad
mitted that ``stolen
generations'' is an
emotional, evoca
tive term that
weights the argu
ment, that the re
moval policy was
designed with the
best Christian, pa
ternalistic motives;
that there were in
numerable cases
where removal was
justified; that there
were cases of un
justifiable removals
done with honour
able motives, you
would still be left
with wrenching
cases which led to
cruel suffering.
It would require
metaphorical blind
ness not to concede
that, or adopting a
contrary position
for the sake of being
contrarian.
It was the position
McGuinness adopt
ed, or charitably, he
had just become
blind.
Whatever his pos
ition, there were al
ways compen
sations.
A favourite was his
passing reference to
then Science Minis
ter Barry Jones as
the only joke in the
Federal Parlia
ment.
No evidence was ad
duced in support of
this description.
There didn't need to
be: the Intellect had
spoken.
The tragedy at the
end was that the
intellect was only in
support of the voice.
Posted By: John MacDonald on 6/02/2008 12:40:48 AM | Comments (0)